A View of Life
Through time and space,
The journey is his race.
A story to be told,
of a span, young to old.
'My time is short.' thought he,
'No matter how long it may be.'
The past is always near,
right and wrong, never clear.
2007-08-28 06:54:48 · 22 answers · asked by Coop 366 7 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Interesting. Deep on so many levels and yet, vaguely light hearted.
2007-08-28 07:03:48 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Metaphysical, almost. You'd probably enjoy the poetry of Sir Walter Raleigh. None of that hearts-and-flowers stuff! Good poem.
2007-08-28 18:30:57 · answer #2 · answered by jenesuispasunnombre 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Great poem!! Really deep. This reminds me, for some reason, of that book "The Way Of The Peaceful Warrior:" By Dan Millman. You should read it.
2007-08-28 13:58:59 · answer #3 · answered by Adeth4Told 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
This is an interesting poem. The last line makes me think and wonder. I like that.
2007-08-28 14:27:41 · answer #4 · answered by Marguerite 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It has a strobing effect, flashing the subject off and on. Hypnotic almost. Cool.
2007-08-28 14:34:12 · answer #5 · answered by TD Euwaite? 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
space and time
youse them iam
but share the need
we will all seed
and the ideas we make
show we are fake
and that how we came to be
a memeroy for me
2007-08-28 14:07:09 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Okay, I quess that's a good short poem.
2007-08-28 13:58:10 · answer #7 · answered by Coachstoll 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
it's lovely! do like the span part
2007-08-28 13:57:59 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
OMG ! I love it expect span ? eww. but besides that very Good. job !
2007-08-28 13:57:28 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's ok. Not particularly clever, but better than most on here.
2007-08-28 13:57:39 · answer #10 · answered by Ronnie 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋