Suicidal Snow
It is not fire,
it is a glacier falling,
melting all alone.
2007-08-28 06:35:52 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
good job, dez
it rings true and has meaning in several planes.
2007-08-28 06:41:25 · answer #1 · answered by Cassor 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I agree with Scotty about rating Haiku. I am also not very worried about global warming. We don't understand everything about this world. What caused the ice age? ... The weather is the weather, whether or not we have any influence over it. The emissions of every gasoline engine in the world would have to run for over 5years straight to equal the ammount of CFCs emitted by a medium volcanic eruption.
2007-08-28 14:22:28 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
it is 0
2007-08-28 13:40:38 · answer #3 · answered by ♥♥A7X♥♥ 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
awww dude. I didn't know you were a poet. let alone a really frinkin good one!
Here is my favorite Haiku, I made it for a 10th grade poetry contest
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Defiance:
I won't be confined
To mere syllable counting.
so SCREW, your Haiku,
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2007-08-28 14:55:38 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
I give it a rating of Standard.
2007-08-28 14:28:39 · answer #5 · answered by TD Euwaite? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's very juvenile. Also, even though most people pronounce it like it has two syllables, "fire" is a one-syllable word.
2007-08-28 13:49:26 · answer #6 · answered by Ronnie 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I don't rate Haiku:
Not enough words to critique;
Judgment, meaningless.
2007-08-28 14:07:15 · answer #7 · answered by Scotty Doesnt Know 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
that is pretty good
2007-08-28 13:51:18 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋