The Korean War was raging. People were dying. Families were being torn apart. Eisenhower set out to look for a cure. By threatening to use nuclear weapons he obtained a truce in Korea, ending the Korean war and easing tensions in the U.S.. The cease-fire signed by the president had brought armed peace along the border of South Korea. President Eisenhower worked for the common good of all. His devotion to the community had many benifits. He concentrated on maintaining worl peace and devoloped an "atoms for peace" program. He watched in pleasure as his creation took its course. He pointed out "America today the strongest, most influential and most productive nation in the world".
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2007-08-27 16:52:50 · 5 answers · asked by stayyoung 3 in Politics & Government ➔ Government
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2007-08-28 16:36:44 · update #1
So far in the beginning, I'm not sure if you need U.S. to be U.S.. for the period. I understand what you're doing but I'm not quite sure. Anyways there's a bit of problems with this part.
His devotion to the community had many benifits. He concentrated on maintaining worl peace and devoloped an "atoms for peace" program. He watched in pleasure as his creation took its course. He pointed out "America today the strongest, most influential and most productive nation in the world".
Benefits is spelled wrong.
World is spelled wrong.
Developed is spelled wrong.
And instead of ''America today the strongest, most influential and most productive nation in the world".
Try "America is the strongest, most influential and most productive nation in the world."
Oh btw, the period is suppose to come before the quotation marks at the end.
2007-08-27 17:02:52 · answer #1 · answered by MahoMisumi 1 · 2⤊ 0⤋
The Korean War was raging. People were dying. Families were being torn apart. Eisenhower set out to look for a remedy. By threatening to use nuclear weapons, he obtained a truce in Korea, ending the Korean war and easing tensions in the U.S.. The cease-fire signed by the president brought armed peace along the border of South Korea. President Eisenhower worked for the common good. His devotion to the community had many benefits. He concentrated on maintaining world peace and developed an "atoms for peace" program. He watched in pleasure as his creation took its course. He pointed out, "America is today the strongest, the most influential and most productive nation in the world"."
2007-08-27 17:01:17 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
The Korean War was raging. People were dying. Families were being torn apart. Eisenhower set out to look for a cure. By threatening to use nuclear weapons he obtained a truce in Korea, ending the Korean War and easing tensions in the U.S... The cease-fire signed by the president had brought armed peace along the border of South Korea. President Eisenhower worked for the common good of all. His devotion to the community had many benefits. He concentrated on maintaining world peace and developed an "atoms for peace" program. He watched in pleasure as his creation took its course. He pointed out "America today the strongest, most influential and most productive nation in the world".
not too many and i think a few of them were just typos. i like it though. is it yours? like did you write it? i make scrapbooks for my hubby who's in iraq. would you mind if i added it to my books?
2007-08-27 16:59:41 · answer #3 · answered by candace b 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The Korean War was raging. People were dying. Families were being torn apart. Eisenhower set out to look for a cure. By threatening to use nuclear weapons he obtained a truce in Korea, ending the Korean war and easing tensions in the U.S.The cease-fire signed by the president had brought armed peace along the border of South Korea. President Eisenhower worked for the common good of all. His devotion to the community had many benefits. He concentrated on maintaining world peace and developed an "atoms for peace" program. He watched in pleasure as his creation took its course. He pointed out "America today the strongest, most influential and most productive nation in the world".
2007-08-27 16:59:14 · answer #4 · answered by 27ysq 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Spelled benefits and world wrong. Other then that looks good.
2007-08-27 17:37:33 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋