is this a good intro?

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is this a good intro?

give me some pointers/ things i should put in it is about stereotypes .

In the movie “Van Wilder” Directed by Walt Becker, there are many stereotypes directed towards college life and adolescents. In this Essay I will point out how these stereotypes are affecting how we view young people going to college.

2007-08-27 14:37:42 · 1 answers · asked by italian wakesurfer 2 in Social Science ➔ Psychology

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No, you have to find another way to rephrase this:

"In this Essay I will point out how these stereotypes are affecting how we view young people going to college."

You never explain your what your essay will be about in the first person. Rethink your hypothesis.

2007-08-27 16:09:48 · answer #1 · answered by Kuntawista 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋