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so far it is about this girl who befriends a wizard, and they must travel to get a special sward to defeat the dark ruler. She falls in love with him, but finds out he is engaged. what should happen next?

2007-08-26 14:37:24 · 5 answers · asked by Bari Saxi Girl 1 in Arts & Humanities Books & Authors

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oo, me like.
honestly, I can't think of anything right now. Maybe I'll edit later and have some ideas for you

*Edit
okay, he has to choose between them.one way or another, the fiance finds out that this girl has feeling for her man. so then she asks him who he loves, and to her surprise, he says he can't answer that yet. now she's all mad and tries to find a way to mess the girl up, and he risks everything to try and save her. now the fiance HATES them both! and blah blah blah.
good luck on your writing!

2007-08-26 14:41:44 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

The wizard should fall in love with her too, and at the end decide between his Fiance or this girl. But make the decision a hard one, one where he doesn't know who he loves more, and make the journey to get the sword a hard one,too.

2007-08-26 14:48:10 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

Stop writing now and start working on character studies and an outline. This is a good example of where "winging it" is failing you. You need to know more about your characters. The more you know about them the more you will know how they react in different situations. It sounds to me like you know very little about your characters. Somehow a Dark Ruler being engaged comes off sounding funny to me. Dark Rulers tend to kind of take what they want. I can't see one "getting engaged". You need to work more on your characters so you know more about their motivations and actions. And please ...the word is sword. Pax - C

2007-08-26 14:52:39 · answer #3 · answered by Persiphone_Hellecat 7 · 1 2

She is in love with him, but he is in love with someone else. She tries to tell him about her feelings. But he can't do anything. They both try to be friends. But it doesn't work because of an attraction between them. And finally he realizes that he changed his mind about her. But she got over him. Hope this helps.

2007-08-26 15:09:13 · answer #4 · answered by Irina S 2 · 0 0

he realizes that shes the one for him and he breaks of his engagement.

2007-08-26 14:50:31 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1 2

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