im running for team captain, and i want to know what you guys think of this speech. (our team came last last yeer);
My name is _____ for those of your who do not know me. i am not here to promise you an easy year, to garuntee you victory, or superiority, but i can garauntee one thing, i can garuntee that thorne (team name), the spartans, will no longer be looked at as a bottom house. we will have superior organization, passion, and a thirst to win. we will become as a unit, as a block. vote for me and we will have such an impact on thorne that it will last for years to come. vote for me and we will be known as the year that thorne held no mercy. vote for me, and lets start the spartan revolution.
2007-08-25 16:30:43 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Politics & Government ➔ Elections
That is good
2007-08-25 16:34:13 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Excellent speech with a Spartan attitude.
2007-08-25 23:39:28 · answer #2 · answered by FRAGINAL, JTM 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would give it a 6, you need to proof read it a little. Good luck with your season tho...
2007-08-25 23:40:43 · answer #3 · answered by Injun 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It sounds good and honest.
2007-08-28 16:52:59 · answer #4 · answered by Unsub29 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not bad but how about this? VOTE FOR ME OR I'LL KICK YOUR ***!
2007-08-25 23:37:50 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes, I like it, too!
btw, you misspelled guarantee - ok - I know - you don't care, but just for future reference! :)
2007-08-25 23:41:49 · answer #6 · answered by KYGrace 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋