How soft the night
As light breaks with thunder
Clouded kisses
Linger in the storm
Shadows starving
Lost without form.
Forgiving questions
And answers unsaid
Stealing a moment
With a whisper in the wind
Memories untouched
Forgotten in the sin.
How soft the night,
Lightning from an angel
Traces of passion
Embraced by faith
Tremble, Falter,
Hunger for space.
Gathered within feathers
Guilded by idols
Dancing in her dreams
False prayers in turmoil
Passed on by fate
To the mortal coil.
How soft the night,
My breath brushed by heaven,
Symphonies in Silhouettes,
Another dance, Another place,
Another time, Another grace,
Shining by the light,
Every soft night.
2007-08-24 22:32:28 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
How soft the night,
My breath brushed by heaven,
''Symphonies in Silhouettes,
Another dance, Another place,
Another time, Another grace,
Shining by the light,
Every soft night.''
This is the best part of your poem ...for me it uplifted my spirits and felt like Heaven.
2007-08-24 23:00:26 · answer #1 · answered by birdtennis 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
How Soft The Night?
2014-11-28 04:14:15 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
The night so soft beckons me to its dreams of a unified and whole me
free from despair
open, loving, and willing to share
myself knowing love that begins with me
this night so soft is cherished by she - cherished by we.
2007-08-26 15:30:33 · answer #3 · answered by Soul Flower 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful imagery. I was really drawn in to this poem. Some people think this kind of language is outdated and irrelevant in today's world, but I loved every word.
2007-08-25 01:39:45 · answer #4 · answered by Starfall 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Once again I love your poetry. If I wasn't so shy about my own I would show you as well...maybe someday.
2007-08-25 11:11:41 · answer #5 · answered by doggie love 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i am a beginner, so maybe my opinion is wrong.
you only describle the environment, but it feels lonely. can you more interact wiht people? maybe it can feel touch better.
somehow, i jsut explain my first impression.
2007-08-24 23:18:22 · answer #6 · answered by Tracy But 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
It is beautiful. I love how you draw ever type of darkness into your poem. It is amazing.
2007-08-25 01:42:04 · answer #7 · answered by Rae 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful, inspired.....Thank you for sharing it.
2007-08-25 05:17:47 · answer #8 · answered by peace seeker 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
highly refined and appealing
2007-08-24 23:32:12 · answer #9 · answered by swati_chhavi 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋
very nice words,you have true talent.
2007-08-25 04:47:09 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋