PUNCTUATION HELP. “Okay how about counting sheep?” Timmy whispered to himself.?

Question

“1 sheep…2 sheep…3 sheep...4 sheep…Agh this isn’t going to make me sleep! I hate this house!”
Timmy and his parents had moved to a new house because his dad had been given a promotion far away from their old home.
“OH MY GOD, Could it be anymore hotter in here?” Annoyed Timmy said.
He jumped out of bed and walked to his window, Pulled up the curtain and a saw a mysterious green light he followed where the green light was coming from then he saw it coming form a tree. He quickly ran down the stairs, opened the door, ran to a tree and touched the green light. The ground started shaking! A door appeared out of no where. Timmy slowly opened the door…He say a string he pulled it, Lights came on, he say a couch, pinball machine, a fridge, a tv and games everything!
“What have I found?!” Amazed Timmy said.
Then from a window he saw his parents bedroom light on he quickly opened the door and ran to his house, ran up the stairs, to his bed.
He woke up it was all a dream

Answer 1

“1 sheep…2 sheep…3 sheep...4 sheep…Agh hh...this isn’t going to make me sleep! I hate this house!”
Timmy and his parents had moved to a new house because his dad had been given a promotion far away from their old home.
“OH MY GOD, could it be any hotter in here?” Timmy said as he was feeling very annoyed.
He jumped out of bed and walked to his window, pulled up the curtain and a saw a mysterious green light. He followed the green light and saw it was coming from a tree. Quickly he ran down the stairs, opened the door, ran to a tree and touched the green light. The ground started shaking! A door appeared out of no where. Timmy slowly opened the door…He saw a string , he pulled it and lights came on. He saw a couch, pinball machine, a fridge, a tv and games and everything!
“What have I found?!” said Timmy in amazement.
Then from a window he saw his parents bedroom light on. He quickly opened the door and ran to his house, ran up the stairs and jumped into his bed.
He woke up and realized it was all a dream

Answer 2

wow i don't even know where to start mainly because i'm not exactly sure what you are asking. but i'll proofread your little story.

“Okay, how about counting sheep?” Timmy whispered to himself.

“1 sheep, 2 sheep, 3 sheep, 4 sheep. Agh this isn’t going to make me sleep! I hate this house!" Timmy exclaimed.
Timmy and his parents had moved to a new house because his dad had been given a promotion far away from their old home.
“OH MY GOD, Could it be any hotter in here?” Timmy said out of frustration.
He jumped out of bed and walked to his window, and he pulled up the curtain and saw a mysterious green light. He followed the trail of green light and saw that it was coming from a tree. He quickly ran down the stairs, opened the door, ran to the tree and touched the green light. The ground started shaking! A door appeared out of nowhere. Timmy slowly opened the door. He saw a string, and he pulled it. Lights came on, and he saw a couch, a pinball machine, a refrigerator, a televison, and games everywhere!
“What have I found?!” Timmy cried out in amazement.
Then from a window he saw his parents' bedroom light on so he quickly opened the door and ran to his house. He ran up the stairs and into his bed.
He then woke up; it was all a dream.

Answer 3

"... Agh, this isn't going to make me sleep! I hate this house!"
"Oh my God, could it be any hotter in here?" Timmy said, annoyed.
He jumped out of bed, walked to his window, and pulled up the curtain. He saw a mysterious green light; he followed the source until he saw the light form a tree. He quickly ran down the stairs, opened the door, ran to the tree, and touched the green light. The ground started shaking. A door appeared out of nowhere. Timmy slowly opened the door. He saw a string and pulled it; light's came on, and he saw a couch, a pinball machine, a fridge, a tv, and games- everything!
"What have I found?" Timmy said, amazed.
Then he saw his parents' bedroom light on through the window. He quickly opened the door, ran into his house and up the stairs to his bed.
He woke up. It was all a dream.