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This boy pushes her onto him then pushes her away, treats her bad at school but good when their alone

2007-08-24 14:21:27 · 8 answers · asked by dianadee17 3 in Arts & Humanities Books & Authors

this is something im writing

2007-08-24 14:22:02 · update #1

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You keep referring to your character as "a bad boy". The reason you are having so many problems figuring out how he will respond in certain situations is because you haven't fleshed him out yet and you don't know who he is. My suggestion is stop writing now. Sit down and start giving this "bad boy" a life. A past, a present, a future. Why is he bad? What has he done? Why has he done it? Who is he? What does he like? Why is he the way he is?

When you start to understand your characters, you will find that you more or less know automatically how they will react in a certain situation. When I ask students to do a character analysis and they bring them back to me, I want to know things like ... Do they brush their teeth up and down or sideways? What is their favorite color? What did they want to be when they were 5 years old? THAT is how well you need to know your characters. Once you do, you put them into situations and you know how they are going to respond.

It sounds like you have jumped into story writing without doing your prep work - your solid homework. You need to work on characterization. It not only helps you with how your characters react in your main plot, it helps you to develop subplots and backstories. When you have good strong character studies and a good solid outline, you will see how much easier your job as the storyteller becomes. Pax - C

2007-08-24 15:15:52 · answer #1 · answered by Persiphone_Hellecat 7 · 3 0

u mean ur writing something like the book a walk to remember?

2007-08-25 03:16:54 · answer #2 · answered by Hello ;) 3 · 0 0

Calls her a *slvt* or something worse... which hurts her - or he calls her *an easy game* which kinda has bad connotations, and that makes her feel really sad

2007-08-24 21:29:52 · answer #3 · answered by Marc Hector 3 · 0 0

Tells everyone he's been with her

de-pants her in school

Bring a pair of bought panies in and say they are hers

Hope that helps

2007-08-24 21:26:26 · answer #4 · answered by M J 6 · 1 0

i doubt want to sound mean, but if your a writer you should learn how to write better. that question dident really make sense so i doubt your story will

2007-08-24 21:25:49 · answer #5 · answered by Derick 3 · 1 0

a) Talks to her in front of her girlfriends, when she obviously doesn't like him (or does she)
b) Tells her off for leading him on when she had no idea she was
c) She tells him he likes/loves her and he frowns and looks away, telling her she isn't his 'type'

2007-08-24 22:42:11 · answer #6 · answered by Pippa McClellan 3 · 0 0

he can call her something behind her back to his group of friends and then not tell her about it

2007-08-24 21:25:39 · answer #7 · answered by tennislover 2 · 1 0

Tell everyone that she was hitting on him

2007-08-24 22:27:11 · answer #8 · answered by Elvendork 4 · 0 0

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