What do you think of my poem...??

Question

I am a depressed girl who hates her life
I wonder what its like to die
I hear Death, calling my name
I see life fading from the world
I want to be alone for once in my life
I am a depressed girl who hates her life

I pretend people actually care
I feel my heart breaking
I touch the sky-then sink back to reality
I worry for only myself, thats why im hated
I cry over the void in my life
I am a depressed girl who hates her life
I understand I should not be this way
I saiy.."Just leave me alone!"
I dream of the day this pain will end
I try to stop all the misery
I hope to be left alone
I am a depressed girl who hates her life




Thats my poem. What do you think? Star if u like it. Star if u feel bad for how terrible it was. Lol :]

Answer 1

i thank the poem was excellent it has a lot of emotion but it is a bit depressing and sad

Answer 2

sounds to me like you need someone to talk to about your depression a professional. no offence intended.life is only as bad as you let people make it, if you truly feel that way talk to someone about what makes you feel the way you do.
i am not a doctor of any kind , but if you need to talk you can e-mail me anytime at all. you can get my e-mail from my profile. if you don't that's OK too, but talk to someone.

Answer 3

I like it because I can relate to it in a way

Answer 4

that was the gayest thing I have ever heard....you'll fit in perfectly w/ the R&S crowd...why don't u go show them?