Love like a light bulb (are we off, are we on?)
The spark had died (dead and gone, dead and gone)
Now you're resting in pieces (Your fault, your fault)
I really wish you hadn't cried (it was emotional assault)
I didn't cry when you told me (you did enough, did enough)
I'm so glad we broke up (I know it's tough, life is tough)
Did you wonder why I was happy? (lucky me, lucky me)
Did you hope that I would choke up? (Now I'm free, now I'm free)
(chorus)
See, the problem was you,
You’d treat me like I wasn’t there
I guess it’s just a thing you do
Next time let me know you care
(uhh-oh, uhh-oh, uhh-oh, uhh-oh,
uhh-oh, uhh-oh, uhh-oh! oh! oh!(sort of yelling))
The girl you kept looking at (yeah I noticed, I noticed)
I was looking at her boyfriend (you didn’t see that, see that)
We’d be good with each other (in your dreams, in your dreams)
But I hope that we can still be friends (just not loveless teens)
Chorus til end.
They're about a m8's relationship.
2007-08-24 08:54:57 · 3 answers · asked by LaLa 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music ➔ Rock and Pop
They're gonna be set to a punky, rocky, poppy beat and I will be singing them.
2007-08-24 08:56:18 · update #1
But They're not about me, They're about a friend. She's away at the mo but i'm gonna ask her if there's anything she'd like to change, coz she ddidn't tell me all of what happened. And Can I ask why Jasonwhateveryournameis?
2007-08-24 09:15:39 · update #2
Fine, I don't know why I bothered. Thanks everyone, You're so supportive, not. Yes I know they're cheesy but my friend is away so I had to fill in the gaps. I'm sorry that they're not good enough for you. Why don't you all have a go at writing some lyrics and SEE HOW HARD IT IS???
2007-08-24 09:40:16 · update #3
Actually the last verse is pretty rubbish. I'm definately gonna change that. Oh well, at least no one will nick them now, since you all obviously hate them.
2007-08-24 09:42:30 · update #4
some parts are pretty good actually
you're one step closer to great song writing!
go more into what you felt though.. instead of like superficial things. all about the emotion!!
good luck
2007-08-24 09:09:34 · answer #1 · answered by ♥ mimi ♥ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
now I have to clean the barf stain offa the desk and monitor, screw the keyboard, it's in the trash
2007-08-24 16:27:27 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
no
2007-08-24 16:05:16 · answer #3 · answered by jason_415_08 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋