of all my poems and which one is your favorite?
You could check out all my poems at http://dear.to/darkwritersandpoets
2007-08-24 08:34:05 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Your poetry is very dark ! I personally think there is enough of that in the world. You claim to be a Christian and yet perpetuate darkness. Light casts out darkness. A child of the Light will seek to quench dark things.
You can express your pain and the pain in the world around you without adding to it. Proclaim a way out and one will appear before you !
2007-08-30 09:30:57 · answer #1 · answered by Dak Aloysius 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dark Betrayal. I really got board with the word forsaken in the rest of your poetry. Read a little more, discover some new words or buy a thesaurus. With a little work you could be great.
2007-08-24 08:43:01 · answer #2 · answered by antbuttercup 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If you want reviews of your poetry, then post them, one at a time, in YA. How hard is that? If you post them here, we'll give you an honest review. If you ask us to go elsewhere, it means you don't feel they're worth repeating in here, so why should we bother? If we have the time to review your poetry, you should show the same courtesy by posting them here.
think about it.
2007-09-01 07:15:27 · answer #3 · answered by Kevin S 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋