"Real People, Real Passion, Really Making a Difference"
Its for a tag line under a logo for a brochure so it has to be right - three comma's doesn't seem right. Three full stops might work or should it be a colon after the real passion as the list ends and "really making a difference" is a statement.... aaarrrggghhh Help!!!!!
2007-08-24 05:04:33 · 18 answers · asked by roskolewis 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
I like:
Real People. Real Passion. Really Making A Difference!
2007-08-24 05:12:22 · answer #1 · answered by credo quia est absurdum 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Hmmm -
Real People, Real Passion; Really Making a Difference
Real People, Real Passion - Really Making a Difference
Real People. Real Passion. Really Making a Difference
Looking at it, I you were right and the full stops are the best bet.
2007-08-24 12:13:51 · answer #2 · answered by Mizzy 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think if your list ends at Real Passion, then it should be a full stop before your statement of Really Making a Difference.
2007-08-24 12:14:19 · answer #3 · answered by Sir Bobby`s Hairdresser 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Real people; Real passion; Really making a difference.
or
Real People; Real Passion: Really making a difference.
2007-08-24 12:18:08 · answer #4 · answered by Hannah B 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I personally would like to read it like this: Real people with real passion really make a difference! OR you can just say Real people, real passion really make a difference. It is up to you on what you feel is the most important part to place emphasis on. Good luck on that , I'm sure you'll figure it out.
2007-08-24 12:14:13 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Real people, Real Passion - Really making a difference !
2007-08-24 12:14:28 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It might look better if you put a dash between each phrase, ie Real People - Real Passion - Really Making a Difference! Or even a bullet point.
2007-08-24 12:29:06 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Should be periods, not commas. And the end phrase needs to go.
Try this..."Real People. Real Passion. Real Progress."
Like the beer commercial...Cool. Crisp. Clear. You get the idea.
2007-08-25 04:58:01 · answer #8 · answered by imrt70 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Real people! Real passion!! Really making a difference!!!
how does that look to you?
2007-08-24 19:57:55 · answer #9 · answered by jennifer f 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Real people, real passion - really making a difference!
mini hugs!
2007-08-24 13:56:43 · answer #10 · answered by jennie f 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋