Does this question have correct gramatical structure?

Question

What should I get for my 15th birthday?

I don't know what I should get. I already have and Ipod,stereo system,cellphone, and computer. I know that I will get money because, my grandparents already give me $50, and my parents also give me money. Clothes are one thing I don't really want because, I will get a lot of them in the summer time and Christmas time. Thankyou for your oppinions.

Does this question have any mistakes in it? Is it in correct grammatical form?

Thankyou.

Answer 1

There are just a few mistakes. Here is is a revision with an explanation for each change. (Changes appear in brackets.)

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What should I get for my [fifteenth] birthday? [Always spell out numbers that are not part of addresses, phone numbers, dates, percentages, etc.)

I don't know what I should get. I already have [an] iPod, [a] stereo system, [a] cellphone, and [a] computer. [Because not all these words begin with vowels, "an" does not universally apply; use a new article for each item in the list.] I know that I will get money because [No comma needed here.] my grandparents already [gave] me $50, and my parents also [gave] me money. Clothes are one thing I don't really want because [No comma needed here.] I will get a lot of them in the ["summertime" = one word] and [Christmastime" = one word]. [Thank you = two words] for your [opinions].
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Hope this helps! And ... happy birthday to you!

Answer 2

Your intent is correct, but your grammar and punctuation needs some assistance. Your question should read as follows:

I do not know what I will receive for my 15th birthday. I already have and Ipod, stereo system,cellphone, and computer. I think that I will get money because my grandparents already gave me $50. My parents also give me money. Clothes are one thing I don't really want because I will get a lot of them at Christmas time. Thank you for your opinions.

Answer 3

What should I get for my 15th birthday?

I don't know what I should get. I already have an Ipod, stereo system, cellphone, and a computer. I know that I will get money because my grandparents already gave me $50 and my parents also gave me some money. Clothes are one thing I don't really want because I will get a lot of them in the summer time and at Christmas time. Thank you for your opinions.

Answer 4

I don't know what I want for my 15th birthday. I already have an Ipod, stereo system, cellphone, and computer. I know that I will get money because my grandparents already gave me $50; and my parents also give me money. Clothes are the one thing I don't really want because I will get a lot of them in the summer time and at Christmas time. Thank you for your opinions.

Does this question have any mistakes in it? Is it in correct grammatical form?

Answer 5

I don't know what I should get. I already have and Ipod,stereo system,cellphone, and computer. I know that I will get money, because my grandparents already give me $50, and my parents also give me money. Clothes are one thing I don't really want, because I'll get a lot of them in the summer Christmas time. Thank you for your opinions.


Err, I just made a few changes here and there, like changing the place of some commas, and stuff like that. Hope this helps.

Answer 6

I work as an editor and the only thing you might wish to do is change 15th to fifteenth. It's typically preferable to keep numbers in their word form rather than in numerals. Otherwise, this sentence works just fine.

Answer 7

There are 4 questions. (Questions being sentences ending in question marks)

Question #1 and #3 both have spelling errors.
The paragraph has 7 errors ( grammar and spelling).
The entire page has 10 errors.

Hope this helps.

Answer 8

this is correct grammatical form

Answer 9

yes in your paragraph there is no space between thank you and opinion is spelled wrong. no comma before and.

Answer 10

nope... there's a thing called spell check.. try that first!