out of the silence
astral enlightments
melting the spirit into existance
past recollections
resting in silence
and never remmembered
spirit and matter unite to create mortal life
physical awareness awakes to embrace solar lights
lights
solar lights
nature's might
holds the key to the life
born to be and to see deeply feel
join and become pain in ur life
predestination and karma remain at ur side
physical awareness awakes to embrace solar lights
2007-08-21 06:22:29 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music ➔ Rock and Pop
I enjoyed it. I really love topics that have to do with the metaphysical and preternatural. I may be biased...but it's right up my alley. Have you got any more? Email me at arielena@yorku.ca. I'll send you some of mine.
2007-08-21 06:38:11 · answer #1 · answered by arielena_123 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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Really ........ Really ..... not just praising
very nice and pleasant
i don't know how to comment on poetry
i'm not a good student at it :-D
but i do FeeL it soooooo much
Thanks so much,Jason , for sharing your poem with us
you are brilliant
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2007-08-21 13:39:54 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
In all the noise
terestrial idiocy
heating up my body to death
future imaginings
stirring in the bustling chaos...
And so on, you get the point?
2007-08-21 13:32:01 · answer #3 · answered by Akkakk the befuddled 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋
it stunk like the south end of a north bound mule
2007-08-21 13:58:18 · answer #4 · answered by im feelin this 3 · 3⤊ 2⤋
hm...nice, looks like Ayreon. little bit sharping would be be cool.
2007-08-21 13:40:08 · answer #5 · answered by steven25t 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you have to have a big vocabulary to understand it.
2007-08-22 17:43:17 · answer #6 · answered by abc2 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes =]
2007-08-21 14:27:15 · answer #7 · answered by R. 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
yep.
2007-08-21 14:43:33 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
hmmmmm......yeah
:0)
2007-08-21 14:34:25 · answer #9 · answered by kirstyyy :) 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
nice :)
2007-08-21 13:47:21 · answer #10 · answered by Samantha 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋