you probably want to get rid of the frames. I don't see any reason for them.
I'd get rid of the white and use a slightly lighter shade of blue in the background. that green on white is hard to read
I recommend you make the buttons a lot smaller align them to the left and have a bar continue across that navigation section.
also you probably want to add a width to your paragraphs its not a good practice to have them go from one side of the screen to the other.
the text quality on the top banner is poor and the web site address is blury / smuged and hard to read
2007-08-21 03:13:47
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answered by Anonymous
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Green is my favourite colour, but I'm having second thoughts after seeing your shades of green! Having said that it's not a lost cause.
You may want to think about the corporate identity of you business (young, creative, original, understanding....). What is the image you want to project to your customers.
Then you should pick one or two fonts maximum and stick with them everywhere (You have 4 different fonts!), this will ease the strain on the eyes.
The menu at the top is out dated, you should have that navigation panel to the left, it will make it look tidyer.
The banner at the very top, looks Vile. The colours/fonts clash and make it look cheap and like a joke. You don't need to have the email address there either.
I would recommend you to have a simple first page with only your logo on it, then an "Enter site" icon leading to the current first page.
Good luck!
2007-08-21 01:48:29
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answered by Anonymous
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It looks as unprofessional and cheap as the fact your advertising on Yahoo! Answers. If your selling skins which people aren't going to pay for as there are loads of FREE good ones. The state of the site is so bad, you're meant to be selling a quality looking product.
2007-08-21 01:06:33
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answered by Anonymous
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The colour combination isn't nice to look at and the layout is very dull. Make it a bit more lively with pictures or gif animations. There are also some grammatical errors, so sort them out. Overall, it's a nice start and you will improve with time.
2007-08-21 00:56:17
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answered by Anonymous
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Not too great, and decidedly old fashion (Web 1).
Go to Web 2.0 (That is, use AJAX to avoid reloading the pages between each button!), and validate your site as W3C, or it won't work in a few months.
You could also justify your texts.
2007-08-24 22:40:04
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answered by just "JR" 7
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Perhaps it's my old eyes...or perhaps it's because I've just got out of bed, but the white letters on dark background, then vibrant colors in the headings, well, my eyes hurt :)
Keep in mind too, that alot of men are color blind. If your expected audience is to younger folks, then the color composition might work for you. If to older folks, then maybe not.
Also, If you want folks to be able to print some of your website, we'd have to really work at it to print black on white.
Good luck on your venture! I hope you see alot of success!
2007-08-21 00:49:25
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answered by Dennis R 5
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Try putting some designs on the pages not just the descriptions, so people can get the feel of what your selling them.
2007-08-21 01:18:08
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answered by rcat9999 2
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hey doesn't look bad, maybe you could make the bulk of text a little larger and make it stand out a little more, it looks a little like the small print on a contract LOL, make people want to read it rather than want to skip over it. hope you don't mind the comment, take care and good luck.
2007-08-21 00:50:27
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answered by ? 5
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its good but u need to brake up the big block of writing its like reading an essay. so maybe put in a few pics or whateva but so far so good!
2007-08-21 00:49:09
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answered by colette b 2
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I like the green. It looks good. Everyone has their favourite colour but the green looks nice. Yeah, I like it!!
2007-08-21 00:55:45
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answered by wise old owl 3
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