I can't even imagine how difficult it would be to go into a school, after having a very virtuosic brother graduate.
thank you!
2007-08-20 22:55:12 · 4 answers · asked by M.K. 3 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
I would change 'after having' to 'after having had'.
It is unclear whether it is your brother who has graduated, or the brother of the person you are speaking to.
Better alternatives are:
I can't even imagine how difficult it would be for you to go into a school when your very virtuosic brother has already graduated.
I can't even imagine how difficult it would be to go into a school now my very virtuosic brother has graduated.
2007-08-20 23:38:08 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
You don't need the comma. "into a school after having a very virtuosic brother graduate" is all modifying "to go".
Other than that, it's a bit awkward, and could probably be said better.
2007-08-21 00:38:27 · answer #2 · answered by sdc_99 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ya guess so
2007-08-20 23:37:00 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes i think so.. :)
2007-08-20 23:14:39 · answer #4 · answered by HK 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋