Put it to a sorta fast country beat
Jumpin' off the high dive
Into a pool of risk
Takin' a chance
Goin' after what you want
Whether it be that man
That's always on your mind
Or that job promotion that's on the line
You've just got to get,
get it done
Don't waste any time
Thinkin' it over in your mind
Your Jumpin' off the high dive
Take that leap, jump the gun
You'll never know if you don't try
That's all I have on that one so far
Okay put this one to a slow country beat
It's the one place every country child dreams of,
The place you go and all your hopes come true
then something something
I wish I may, I wish I might
become a star tonight
You lie awake thinkingof that moment
When you'll get to sing up on that stage
All your screaming fans
Wishing that they could be you
2007-08-20 00:36:50 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music ➔ Country
That's really discriminating :(
2007-08-20 00:44:08 · update #1
Isn't anyone going to read my songs? :(
2007-08-20 00:48:09 · update #2
I like the first one a lot. It's got a couple kinks in the lyrics rhythmically that need to be worked out - but you are good at visualizing yourself doing these songs, and it's testament to your confidence.
2007-08-20 01:14:21 · answer #1 · answered by Your Uncle Dodge! 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
The first one needs more structure, more cohesive thought, taking the leap and jumping the gun are two distinctly different thoughts and processes. One is a leap of faith, the other is knee jerk without thought. Grab the main idea and make sure your verses support it, the chorus brings it out, and the bridge is the additional/supporting idea.
Keep working, sometimes it is a "stream of consciousness" exercise and finally it all comes together.
2007-08-20 01:03:36 · answer #2 · answered by Travis McGee 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
If you didn't write country in the first place, then don't write country at all.
It really depends on the music in the background.
2007-08-20 01:47:55 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Well the lyrics look good but I cant really judge it without the music you know what I mean.
2007-08-20 00:47:59 · answer #4 · answered by starryeyed 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
didn't read them......as soon as i saw "country beat" i knew they sucked.....sorry.
they say that country music speaks to the heart, the problem is that it has to go through your ears to get there.
2007-08-20 00:41:20 · answer #5 · answered by bmuel11 4 · 0⤊ 3⤋