He stands and leans against the wall
His bitter tears they burn and fall
Into the green beneath his feet
Tis what he sowed and now he reaps
She searches deep within his eyes
But all she sees is a web of lies
He reaches out to hold her hand
And mercilessly she takes a stand
Can you finish this if you can and it's good you get the points.
2007-08-19 06:43:52 · 23 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Let me just say you people ROCK!!!! lol.
2007-08-19 07:27:11 · update #1
Hope you don't mind but I've used bits of everyones (sorry to all)!
I stand and lean on the barn wall
my bitter tears begin to fall
into the grass beneath my feet
because of what I've sown
I now must reap
I search deep within your eyes
I find no feeling for me - do you despise?
I want to reach out and take your hand
but I know you'll never understand
A bitter sweet moment
No one can deny
at lease they can't say we didn't try
Our hearts are stained
in untold truths
I never realised what I would lose
Now on the horizon a figure stands
She reaches out and takes your hand
I'd beg and plead for you to stay
but I realise you must walk away.
2007-08-19 07:24:01 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 1⤋
she raged with anger as he looked
a duckling in the rain, so soaked
yet she knew the truth at full
that fiend had been unfaithful
she pulled a gun, from the bottom drawer
as her eyes showed the scene of war
she aimed the nozzle at his chest
and let the trigger, do the rest
she smirked, seeing him lose his life
a husband murdered by his wife
yet she was very much content
as the fiend, had met his end
although she was a little sad
but her soul was very glad
for now she knew, he was safe
not cheating her, but in the grave!!
This is the best I cud do…….i think I deserve the best answer!
2007-08-19 07:59:22 · answer #2 · answered by Karrar r 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
She takes the stand and stands her ground
the words she says are so profound
her self defence mechanism quickly kicks in
the lies he says are nothing new
but she See's the cheater through and through
as she turns her back on him
she says her final goodbyes
and all he See's is strength
but never the tears that fill her eyes.
2007-08-19 07:04:06 · answer #3 · answered by Richard 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Her eyes do burn as if to brand
this green he sows, with his hand
but whats it worth is life to grand
without the love and the ladies hand
his love of life is all he's got
his love of her is worth a lot
her love for him is simply rot
but lies and webs are sown to Garrot
2007-08-19 11:19:49 · answer #4 · answered by Thor 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
only ideas ways means
He comes when none was
appears just like a ghost
but consciouness dreams and so
So on she was thinking why love
is cruel in so very short of time
women, double efforts to forget
she was not be rejected send it him
On the match as a record
can`t go on he was not alone
fainting me now fingers has no force to go on
only love could save my love
But she will forget neurons jobs
won`t be able to do any simple things
only music poetry came around
and his brother ejerced his law of love
2007-08-19 10:38:20 · answer #5 · answered by Maria Valle B 1 · 2⤊ 0⤋
and on the horizon a figure stands,
precariously he holds out his hand,shes torn between the two of them.but pulled towards the better man.
shes been hurt once,but swore never again, so off to the horizon to start her new life with caine?
I'm no poet,but it just came into my head,worth a go.
2007-08-19 06:57:46 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
A bitter sweet moment no one can deny
At least who could say he didn't try
His heart is stained with untold truths
By her unforgiving ways he knew he'd loose.
Sorry not very good but i like poetry.
2007-08-19 06:55:06 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
she push him out of the way
as she walk away into the shadow
he is blind by her beauty
the beauty of a devil rose's
she know that this is the last time
but the fire in her eyes still burn
his passion is creepy behind her
as she disappear into the gaps of darkness
their will always be love in them
because love will find a way
2007-08-19 06:58:22 · answer #8 · answered by WILD_V 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
She sets her chin and turns her back,
Awaiting the verbal attack.
But no words asail her as she leaves,
Just the wind in the autumn trees.
I got stuck at the end, the autumn trees sounds a little lame to me but its my best shot!
2007-08-19 06:51:23 · answer #9 · answered by Andromeda Newton™ 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
a poem should be from your heart
you'll never be proud of it if someone else tears it apart!
have some faith and it'll come to you
you have a good start, so think of a clue
go for a walk.. phone a friend
eat some food..the list never ends!
but the thing you should never do
is ask someone to finish it for you!
:) hehe o come on, that deserves the best answer! lol
xxx much luuurve xxx
2007-08-19 06:57:14 · answer #10 · answered by x--Z--x 2 · 4⤊ 1⤋