My Ideal Man
I like him sweet
With pretty feet
And muscles with heat,
So there will always be something my mind can eat.
Pretty eyes
Like my thighs
And pretty, small lips
Just like my hips.
Pretty hair
And nice breath that's like the scent of the air.
Honest, and trustworty
With no topsy turvy.
Candy Grandpre
2007-08-19 04:00:06 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Ooh, I like it. A lot. Hey Candy, if you find a man like that, will you see if he has an older brother for me. LOL
2007-08-19 05:01:25 · answer #1 · answered by Patti C 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's more of a rap song than a poem, at least the type of poem that has a rhyme scheme and metre. But you sound pretty young, so maybe by the time you graduate high school you'll have that under control (or be a multi-millionaire with a singing career).
Good luck!
2007-08-19 11:08:04 · answer #2 · answered by Mitch 5 · 0⤊ 3⤋
I like it...especially the last 2 lines, but the whole package sounds very nice! I hope you find him! =D
2007-08-19 11:10:06 · answer #3 · answered by F-1 says KISS IT! 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It very nice actually, sounds like you would like to meet a gentleman, lol.
2007-08-19 11:04:56 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It made me smile. Maybe you could even turn it into a song since it's catchy.
2007-08-19 11:16:08 · answer #5 · answered by ♥Celebrity Hotline♥ (Thumbs up!) 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
It's Different,, although, I cant write poetry to save my life !!
2007-08-19 11:08:36 · answer #6 · answered by Ande-Lin F 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Kinda cutesy...but still a good poem.
2007-08-19 11:02:47 · answer #7 · answered by Lil Miss Answershine 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it.
2007-08-19 12:02:30 · answer #8 · answered by Sarah dinho... Milan/Barca 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Not bad.
2007-08-19 11:57:03 · answer #9 · answered by jasmin2236 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very first grade-ish.
2007-08-19 11:04:19 · answer #10 · answered by ana2rosa2003 7 · 0⤊ 4⤋