When writing a story...?

Question

how could i describe a very attractive woman?

Answer 1

She slithered in like a snake, her tongue darting in and out, her cold black eyes glaring at me across the room, I knew I would sell her my soul.

Answer 2

Use over excessive adjectives. Let the reader know just how attractive she is, and it definitly works to have the main character stumble over himself.

For example:

"A woman suddenly glided into the room, her jade green eyes alight with laughter. Jared did not know who she was, but he wanted desperately to find out. Her midnight black hair cascaded down her small back and tumbled playfully as she moved. Her lips looked red and luscious. Jared could feel a longing inside of him that he was quite ashamed of. Her every move filled him with wonder; she was so graceful. She looked intelligent, and she was beautiful. Oh, how lovely she was. Jared had not seen a real woman in so long, with legs like that, and a light in her soul that shone through those green eyes. Her perfect complexion made him sigh at how old his skin was. Her pretty little hands made his seem so large and clumsy. Her energy caused his shyness look so unattractive. And even though everything about her made him feel worse about himself, he still adored her, wanted her, and needed to know her. It was in that smile and that glint in her eyes."

Just an example. Exaggerate a little. Show passion and longing and desire. Make her a tad bit unreal. But most of all, put her in a positive light. Don't reveal any faults if you want her to be extremely attractive. Have her flaws come up later in the tale, because this bit is about the first impressions and that amazing attraction that a very pretty woman has on a man.

Good luck!

Answer 3

many ways. You have to decide exactly what she looks like. What's attractive to one, isn't to another. You should have a picture in your mind of what she looks like, then just write it all down. Everything, how she's dressed at the time, how her hair is done, any make up, what color her eyes are, any peculiarities, everything you can think of, size shape, all of it. Then take that and work it into a description. You probably won't want to use it all at once. If she is a main character, give more details as you go along. If she's not a main character, be sparse in your description, since it won't really matter all that much. You might be better off describing the character's reaction to her features such as "her dark eyes made Vincent feel as if he was falling into a dark, deep hole, never to climb out again." Whatever, like that. If an ancillary character, her looks are not as important as the main characters reaction to them.

Answer 4

To be a good writer, you need to be a good reader.. read some erotic literature and look at how other people describe women. It's not always boobs / butt / hair / eye color / weight..

Describe the air around her.. is she confident or shy? How do those around her react to her? This is also a way of describing her.. Point out little details and small imperfections: a thin silver bracelet danging from her delicate, perfumed wrist or a small brown dot of a mole by her ear.

Use metaphors, but sparingly. Don't be afraid to use alliteration and words that just want to fall of the tongue.

Answer 5

She was petite, slim and mousey. She wore tortoise-shell glasses. Her hair was long and brown, tied up in the back of her head. She usually had her slender nose in a book. She could answer any question at the Reference Desk and was good with the computer. She could find any sort of book you were looking for, or tell you where to find it. I imagined her in a soft pink negligee, flowing, dancing dreamily to a Reggae beat. Her hair was down, her glasses were off, her lips were full and round.
I kissed her and she smiled a Mona Lisa smile...

Answer 6

What would you find attractive in a woman? Search within your own lurid mind and you will find the best answer to that question. To be a better writer you have to learn to trust your own instincts!

Answer 7

danger and reward or reward and punishment...

attraction and repulsion: desire for suppression yet amplification of self if man, envious attraction if woman (according to perspective of voice)

hormonal reactions (pheromones) --gut instincts

smell -- roses are death as example, other olfactory symbology of smell according to norms

tactile data. -- "she crackles the air with spiritual ozone as she passes, raising hairs and burning the skin and airways, causing some allergic reactions" ...

Answer 8

If she's the love interest, the man in the book is going to be longing for her after she leaves. Give him a look, the smell of her perfume. Give him something to rave over when she leaves.

Answer 9

many ways... Whats the first thing you notice about a woman?
than describe form there... Or think in terms what do you want your reader to know about her first....Her eyes, breasts, legs or even her mind.... Get it down on paper first so to speak than you can go back and tweak it later......

Answer 10

"A red wing giveaway, catching your eye from the corner of the bar with her black and blue eye still glistening from the shiner she got moments earlier, a soothing reminder that she had low enough standards for me"