As sleep eludes me again...
I think of you, it brings back an empty pit....
I cry burning tears,
I'm tired of being dragged down...
I can't break away, It's like I'm drowning....
I feel a lump in my throat that makes it hard to breathe....
Your so far away... away from me.... why should I even care? I'm tired of making myself hurt,
forcing myself to stay up... just to be able to talk to you....
for what...
one moment of happiness then I sink farther down...
Do you seek pleasure in it when you read what I wrote...
what if I told you that you started it..... you made me start it... what does that make you feel like? Do you even care?
Now I can't stop.... any pain..... whatever it may be...
I'm cold, I'm always cold,
I can feel the heat sucked out of me...
from the pain... sucking all warmth,
just leaving a bitter chill that won't go away.....
2007-08-18 14:04:26 · 5 answers · asked by Steph! 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
Very good. I could actually feel your pain through these words. Very touching.
2007-08-18 16:31:36 · answer #1 · answered by kepjr100 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
end it on a possative note,,that will show the defeat of the struggle
2007-08-19 02:14:27 · answer #2 · answered by deezel09 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it, and it could be a poem. at least i understand this one.
2007-08-19 08:53:15 · answer #3 · answered by BABY GIRL 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hauntingly beautiful
2007-08-18 14:08:21 · answer #4 · answered by fullofsugaw 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i love it...
great job =]]
2007-08-18 14:15:18 · answer #5 · answered by Kandice 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋