Coments, Critique?

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The past is a memory.
The future a guess.
The begining and end of time
...is now.

2007-08-18 06:07:32 · 3 answers · asked by Phoenix Quill 7 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry

Kudos, truth always comes with very few words. If this is the way you write I will bet in no time you will find yourself published.

2007-08-18 10:18:58 · answer #1 · answered by WACVET75 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋

Pathetic. Keep writing like that and you will never, ever, ever get published.

2007-08-18 20:22:03 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋

pretty boring in my opinion. I get what you're saying, but it's hardly a poem.

2007-08-18 13:20:37 · answer #3 · answered by ithek_thundervoice 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋