Heres one i wrote earlier.
Shirley and Bill Like each other very much,
So Bill $exed Shirley two times before dinner!
Then he touched her booby and ran away scared.
Have i a talent for erotica?
Honest opinions please.
2007-08-18 05:56:45 · 17 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
not very good.
2007-08-18 06:02:17 · answer #1 · answered by ? 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
That would be talented if you are 13 years old. If you are an adult then maybe you want to work on your writing some more.
2007-08-18 13:03:15 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 1⤋
lol, Yes.
Only if you want them to be in the comedy section. Thats cute..you said booby
2007-08-21 09:08:00 · answer #3 · answered by Victoria. 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Doubtful.
2007-08-18 13:03:48 · answer #4 · answered by Beau R 7 · 0⤊ 2⤋
I doubt you'll find a publisher but don't give up keep working at it and I am sure you will improve
2007-08-18 13:03:08 · answer #5 · answered by Southern Comfort 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Get married. Fiction is a waste if you not enjoy the real thing.
2007-08-18 13:16:59 · answer #6 · answered by Amiene Rev 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
You have a talent for being ignorant and trivial
2007-08-21 10:00:13 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
eummm... you know , thats not a story , that are 3 lines ...
And it has no real story in it...
I don't think you have any talent , sorry
2007-08-18 13:03:04 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
thats the most explosive story yet
2007-08-20 04:47:51 · answer #9 · answered by Bumumble 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Try a little harder lol, Sounds like something i would do lol
2007-08-18 13:11:04 · answer #10 · answered by Gene 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Ooooohhhh yeeeaaahhh! That's done it for me, i'm so horny now.... pmsl. xx
2007-08-18 13:04:10 · answer #11 · answered by Lol's 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋