Does this sound like a good topic to write about??

Question

I've brainstormed a little. This topic seems to keep popping into my mind. I don't have any names planned yet so....
There is this girl that plays soccer. She likes this guy that is in most of her classes in school but hasn't told him her feelings yet. This girl is out on her first soccer game, where she comes up to head the ball, but the player competing against her pushes her out of the way. She falls to the ground hard on her head. She is rushed to a hospital, where a surgery is performed on her skull. All of her memories, except soccer and that one guy she likes, are gone. Over a television network to the school, she tells the words I really like you to that guy she likes. This guy is suddenly touched about this, where they meet and they have a relationship together.
Say your opinions, and as I said, I have no names yet, so sorry if this sounds a bit odd to repeat things (if you'd like, you can give character name suggestions).

Answer 1

You need a lot more. There isn't much of a plot. You need some side plots, backstories and a whole lot of characterization. Then you need a lot of research - especially on amnesia, traumatic brain injury etc. Don't worry about names - those happen later. What you need to do first is work on a really good story and flesh out your characters. Pax - C

Answer 2

you need more to your plot. whats going on with her family? how do they react? you need more different plots weaved into her story. more research to make it sound more real. cheers