http://www.storyofagirl.0catch.com/
Some of you may have already read it, but i have changed iut quite a bit!
2007-08-17 08:25:40 · 4 answers · asked by catluvr 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
Sorry about all the pop-ups!
2007-08-17 08:26:01 · update #1
i bet this would be a GREAT story but you need to lighten up on the leisurely (unofficial) tone of the narrator. instead of saying "this guy's arm" say something like "the indelible man's arm reached out bearing a gun in its grave hand while the rest of him remained hidden, shrouded by the shadows" or something like that-get the tone right and you'll get the mood right, get the mood right and the story will be AWESOME. hope that helps
2007-08-17 08:41:53 · answer #1 · answered by venatic 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Many community colleges offer free or low-cost creative writing classes.
2007-08-17 09:31:48 · answer #2 · answered by newyorkgal71 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Shadow boy. sounds like a superhero. otherwise, didnt really care for it.
2007-08-17 08:49:35 · answer #3 · answered by Soul Crusher 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
AH, NEEDS MORE WORK. LOTS MORE.
2007-08-17 08:37:00 · answer #4 · answered by Loren S 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋