SLEEP OVER FUN
"Why is Jill here, in the middle of the night son?"
"We were just having some fun"
(Eight monthes later)
Now look what you did to me JACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Um correct me if im wrong but jack and jill are bf and gf right and this poem has emotion and feeling (it has anger) so its a poem so HA!
2007-08-16 13:05:06 · 3 answers · asked by Evangelist 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
If you think poetry is just about emotion and feeling, then you are wrong. You still have a lot to learn. Keep reading.
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2007-08-16 20:26:07 · answer #1 · answered by Lady Annabella-VInylist 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Poetry is not about being "right"...it either "is" or it "isn't" poetry...you've written a couplet...so I guess it's marginally a "poem"...but if that's it...it doesn't say enough...it's a one liner in a stand-up comedy routine. Funny perhaps, but fluff.
2007-08-19 02:07:11 · answer #2 · answered by Kevin S 7 · 1⤊ 2⤋
lolol. that was beautiful. it really touched me
2007-08-16 21:10:33 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋