meop siht etorw I os ,evol ni ma I?

Question

As you lay your sympathetic head on my tired, yet broken shoulder,

The seeds of warmth are grown within my damaged chamber.

Unleash the mist of glory.
Make my ego bolder.
As if we watched a vivid story.
I wish the time went slower...

When I heard you speak, I gained nothing but your wisdom.

When I felt your friendly presence, the world was ruled by a caring Kingdom.

While the time by passes & calls for need,

I climb the mountain, with force & strength, indeed.

Now...

I know that I can & I will,

because I have dominant power of will.

So come and feel my pulse with pride & dignity,

For the sake of what I call, an Empathy...

Answer 1

.meop ruoy no erom krow ot evah uoy tub !evol ni eb ot taerg s'tI

Answer 2

You're clever, but you need to work on your poem. There is an honest thread of love that weaves throughout your poem, but you keep tying knots in it with words that don't fit, lines that don't work. I can hear your thoughts trying to find the page, but most of them were replaced by imposters...try again...don't work so hard making lines rhyme...just say what's in your heart in a poetic way and see how it comes out.

...and keep writing

Answer 3

if your shoulder is broken you need a surgeon.

Answer 4

I really enjoyed this.

Answer 5

.meop doog