Good introduction for essay?

Question

Is this introduction good for the essay that I am writing?

Is there a possibility that two books on slavery, one fiction and the other non-fiction have similar concepts to it? In the books Uncle Tom’s Cabin by Harriet Beecher Stowe, and Twelve Years A Slave by Solomon Northup, have many similarities in them. Some of those similar things are religion, violence, and unexpected turns in their life. In the essay it will explain how those topics are similarities in the books.

In the essay I have to compare the main characters and events of the classic books. So I was wondering if the introduction of it was good? Is there anything that I need to correct?

Answer 1

Not bad, just a couple of grammar issues.

1. Change "In the books" to simply, "The books"

1. Change "In the essay it will explain" to, "In this essay I will explain."

Answer 2

Well you can also say this:
Is there a possibility that two book on slavery, one fiction and the other non-fiction have similar concepts to it? Two similar book are: Uncle Tom's Cabin by Harriet Beecher Stowe and Twelve Years A Slave by Solomon Northrup. These books have many similarities. Some of them are violence, religion, and unexpected turns in their life and a lot more. In this essay I will be telling you all about their similarities.

Answer 3

Here's an idea: Mixed-sexes at school cause a number of problems: jealousy, competition for attention, premature sexual activities, daydreaming, distractions, beauty competitions, self-image hangups, and (fill in the blanks), to name but a few. Even though same-sex schools have a few similar or opposite downfalls, the education level achieved by a same-sex facility overcompensates these faults. I will prove that the concentration and, ergo, scholarly outcomes achieved at a same-sex school are much higher than a normal mixed school. With facts taken from the National Bereau of Statistics (or whatever it is called there) I will prove, without a shadow of a doubt, that having an All-Boys or an All-Girls secondary college will greatly increase the intelligence of our population. Then go on to talk about how many homosexuals are formed at these types of schools compared to the supressed ones from mixed schooling....LOL Tough case to argue!