One last scar
Makes me complete
Take my heart
Or take your fate
Love can't help you now
Because I'm on my way
To be who I want to be
Too perfect to be perfect
But too lost to be free
2007-08-14 11:31:54 · 15 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
like i said, i just dabbled it down..
=D LOL! i didn't mean it to be deep! lol!
2007-08-14 11:37:19 · update #1
i was never too good at the whole literary thing.
2007-08-14 11:39:57 · answer #1 · answered by Nessa 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds kinda like something I myself wrote one night,but I like your better!!!
Add some more lines,make it a song,and if you can sing record it!!!
Good Luck!!!!
2007-08-14 11:36:54 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow, you just dabbled this down? cool, it sounds great.
2007-08-14 11:39:20 · answer #3 · answered by plasmajosh 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nothing Ive seen worse
2007-08-14 11:38:25 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is great for just jotting this down.
2007-08-14 11:38:18 · answer #5 · answered by Go 24! JG is Awesome! 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is good love it
2007-08-14 11:36:29 · answer #6 · answered by marsh 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
interesting
2007-08-14 11:38:14 · answer #7 · answered by dog lover 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
not my cup of tea but it sound OK.. what does it mean? are you sad or depressed?
2007-08-14 11:37:04 · answer #8 · answered by jackie 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it's nice
2007-08-14 11:35:23 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think it's good. not too deep, but not dumb. insightful.
2007-08-14 11:35:25 · answer #10 · answered by JK 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋