Can you watch this please and tell me how i can improve my acting?

Question

http://www.viddler.com/pinkgirl/videos/1/

heres the link ^^

its for an audition but i think im terrible! =[

can you tell me what you think (honest) and how i can improve?

thanks!!!
=]
(im playing a quite over dramatic person, im the one who talking most)

Answer 1

Well, coming from someone with experience, I would say that was pretty good coming from someone that young. Personally I wouldn't send that video in. Read some comments and improve then make another one of a different scene. That scene does not show off your acting ability at all.

ok you need to cheat out. that means face more toward the audience. I don't know if you want to be in movies or on stage. But for stage you need to face out towards the audience, body and head. Then you need to ANNUNCIATE your words. ESPECIALLY if you are speaking in a defferent accent.
Otherwise that was pretty good! GOOD LUCK! with everything you do!

Answer 2

You are right. You are terrible and you should not send it in for an audition. A monologue would be better than a two-character scene. You talk too fast and indistinctly. You are not very natural in the scene, and you certainly don't make me want to see you again, so you have failed rather badly. Click on my name and read my profile and contact me at my aol address and we can do something to improve your acting.

Answer 3

Focus your attention on telling the other person and forget what you think acting is. Don't stand unless it comes as a natural reaction.

Answer 4

Yes, that was not something to send in. You need some private coaching for sure, and as everyone else said, don't play with your hair as much.

Answer 5

definite definetly....Its like the 1st step to strengthen ur appearing skills...........Many classes and shows that are in seek of actors and actresses opt for them on the inspiration of their appearing ability,wherein they are given a taskto act a particular scene of a action picture...Then after appearing they evaluate it with the unique in the event that they have performed a reliable and a truthful interest they are chosen...In india consisting of appearing dance is likewise considered as area of appearing

Answer 6

you're awesome but don't play with the hair too much, and you sound a bit phony to me, make the voice like very natural...

Answer 7

Try not to play with you hair to much it is really distracting other then that i think it was great!

Answer 8

they were both great.The one in the chair should have had more lines.Do you two really talk like that?Pronounce you words more clearly,and face the audience.Improve those and you are great

Answer 9

wait....
do you really talk like that!