Basically, the girl I like never quite saw how much potential we had, and now she's going out with another guy. I can't help but think if any of the stuff we ever did meant much of anything at all to her. The poems are too big to fit here, so here's the links, please take the time to read them.
"Simply Because"
http://nick.klim.googlepages.com/simplybecause
"Losing You"
http://nick.klim.googlepages.com/losingyou
Thanks a lot.
2007-08-14 07:08:30 · 5 answers · asked by GiantFan 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
The first reminds me of William Carlos Williams - it is unapologetically what it is, told in simple words that nonetheless convey a powerful scene or message.
2007-08-14 09:07:28 · answer #1 · answered by CowboysFan 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Simply Because is my favorite...to the point...we know what you are going through, and can feel as you go through the stages.
Losing You, is a nice poem of memories and I have related some to my own life, although I am still with my longtime partner.
We often remember and try to create more memorable moments.
All the best, CC
2007-08-14 14:18:04 · answer #2 · answered by CC 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Simply Because was the better of the two. Either way, here's the deal...she's moved on...it doesn't matter why, she just has, and you've got to move on as well. You show her the poems she'll say, "how sweet, I "do" think of you, from time to time." But what she won't say is that "thinking of you" is not the same as 'wanting to be with you". You shared a lot of times together, so of course she'll think of you, but if she still "wanted you", she wouldn't be with the other guy. You've vented your soul, it was a good source of inspiration...now move on.
just some advice...you probably already have.
keep writing
2007-08-15 03:07:42 · answer #3 · answered by Kevin S 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Awwww they are really sweat i bet she would be in tears if she read these. As i always say if its meant to be it will be. I think my favorite way probably losing you although the first one was also really good, i found the second one easier to understand your emotions through it.
2007-08-14 18:01:34 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i really like simply because and it reminds me of something else i've read....and it feels very sad.
2007-08-14 16:12:26 · answer #5 · answered by kool-gurl 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋