I have a sentence that i need to sound more official
He might not have been the direct cause of Billy Bob's death but he did not try to stop if either.
Please help revise it.
2007-08-13 16:45:39 · 4 answers · asked by mmiller_2011 3 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
Though he may not have directly caused Billy Bob's death, he certainly did nothing to prevent it from happening.
2007-08-13 17:02:16 · answer #1 · answered by jibba.jabba 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Although he may not have been the direct cause of Billy Bob's death, he did nothing to intervene
2007-08-13 16:54:15 · answer #2 · answered by Ink Corporate 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Indirectly, his apathy may have contributed toward Billy Bob's death.
2007-08-13 17:02:31 · answer #3 · answered by kNOTaLIAwyR 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
He might've not been the direct cause of Billy Bob's death, but he did not try to stop it.
2007-08-13 17:09:50 · answer #4 · answered by vanishdorgans 2 · 0⤊ 2⤋