I was chatting with a online friend one night and sharing memories....he shared one of fireflies with me....I myself have never in all my life seen a firefly. After talking some more ...i asked hime ......"Nwo...sounds like a poem in there somewhere...mind if i try to write one?"
...he said "Sure go for it!
This is what i wrote .......
Fireflies
On a cold Winter Night....
A man remembers a time of a boy in the warmth of summer
of catching fireflies to make a special light
Dancing in the forest to a silent ceremony in the night
the young boys' heart sings in the memory of time.
The boy is all grown and now in the time of a Man
He sees their flight leading toward extinction
A fear that time will show a fading light in the darkness
Yet the boy that still exists in the heart, he sings
Sings a hearts' song of time in the memory
A warming Heart Song
nothing can take that away...not even time.
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Peace and Love to all
R.R.B.
2007-08-13 14:15:40 · 6 answers · asked by RobinRedBear 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
As a man with memories of fireflies, that was refreshing. Actually took me back a buncha years to a time when I chased fireflies and hadn't a care in the world, Thanks and a star.
2007-08-13 14:31:13 · answer #1 · answered by Dondi 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You did an awesome job. The poem was very creative and had a unique style to it. As a writer myself, I think this is incredible work and you should keep going, no matter what other people think. Wherever you got your incredible talent from, just thank God because it's one of the greatest gifts he can give you......the ability to write. I would love to read more of your work. As I would tell anyone else, keep your head up and keep on believing. I believe in you. You will go a very long way. Great Job!!
2007-08-13 15:26:15 · answer #2 · answered by djb32067433_1 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
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2016-10-15 06:02:09 · answer #3 · answered by Erika 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I fell asleep before I finished. That was awful.
2007-08-13 16:39:33 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Deep.
2007-08-13 23:21:58 · answer #5 · answered by bottle babe 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't think you want to hear my thoughts.
2007-08-13 14:19:46 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋