Can I write a poem? Would you write one too?

Question

To look at the sky
and Wow all that flys by?
To understand the absolute beauty of nature
or do we just ponder why?

I wish I could be home
and with my dolphins and friends
the white sand
with me until the end.

It seems like forever since I last
felt the sand
or smelt the flowers from the land.

My heart is lonely
I miss what I have come to know
and the ever pressing memories
I am being told I must let go.

But some days I live in prejudice
and simple as it may seem
I am outraged at what it all means.
A boyfriend who lives and shares despair
and me pretending to be not there.

I am a dreamer and truly believe
that despite the adversity another leave
an acorn, a branch a tree will grow and fall

As my life changes I take it all in
from the squirell to the acorn so my life
it will move on I I shall continue to find the LIGHT.

Answer 1

Okay...it's "squirrel"...not "squirell" (I know, they both "look" wrong, but trust me on this one).

I can see you made a good attempt at poetry here...so I'll give you credit for that. I guess you should start by figuring out if you're going to write a rhyming piece or a free verse one. Then, figure out if you're going to have a pattern...and when you find a pattern, stick with it. You've jumped around with just about everything, settling on nothing...and that's pretty much what you got. However, there were some interesting lines...but they didn't go anywhere.

Maybe you're trying too hard...start with something simple, describe how you feel about it, or what you see in it, and take it from there.

keep writing

Answer 2

Late Night

by Owl

See the cars down on the street.
Where are they going, who will they meet?
Rainbows of colors, red and white
Vehicles traveling throughout the night.
I wonder if my watching makes things come true.
I wonder if you're bother by my watching YOU!!

Answer 3

Anyone can write poetry, but you need a lot of practice, that's all.

I'm not going to write a poem for you, I do not share my poetry for fear it will be stolen.

Answer 4

it was ok and yes i do write poems I write them all the time

Answer 5

I just do them when I feel like it.... and I don't....