Roses are red,
Violets are too.
I'm so lonely,
I wish i were you.
I'm looking for love,
In all the wrong places.
I've had my share of heartbreak,
Bruised ego, lost fortune, and wages.
2007-08-13 00:26:58 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Sounds pretty unique, Raphael. I like it a lot. Good job
2007-08-13 09:43:59 · answer #1 · answered by . 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is very clever, I liked that alot. My favorite part has to be the part where I am so lonely, I wish I were you because I often feelt that way.
2007-08-13 07:33:31 · answer #2 · answered by NONAME 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sell it to a country artist!
2007-08-13 07:35:56 · answer #3 · answered by Jared G 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hey...........
Thatz nice one....
Mayb a few more lines will add beauty to it...
Yu got it in yu pal... Try it... Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease...
2007-08-13 08:02:50 · answer #4 · answered by 13 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats a good one...a star for u
2007-08-13 07:31:31 · answer #5 · answered by Candie-eyes 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you sound depressed ... write something more happy!
keep smiling xxxx
2007-08-13 07:32:15 · answer #6 · answered by iamme 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
You're kidding right? You did this while you were sleepwalking?
2007-08-13 07:32:10 · answer #7 · answered by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Content is good. It made me laugh on a very dreary day. Thanks.
2007-08-13 11:08:02 · answer #8 · answered by bsharpbflatbnatural 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i'm surprised this wasn't about peeps!!
:) lol
2007-08-13 12:49:57 · answer #9 · answered by Kara P 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
awwwww *sniff*
2007-08-13 07:31:13 · answer #10 · answered by 12345 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋