Cold, wet leaves beneath my feet
As I wander along an autumn road
The wind blows, whispering to me
And I'm still unsure of where I go
As I walk on, I hear a hushed voice
My dark love beckons me further on
His enchanting aura blinds my mind
Until I awake and break the spell
Something inside begs me to leave
But curiousity get the best of me
I continue on this path, still alone
Then feel his eyes burning my soul
I begin walking faster, heart pounding
This new fear overcomes my heart
Rushing on, I fall to the dark ground
Wishing now that I'd turned around
His weight crashes onto my body
I scream and fight much to no avail
My white dress stained and torn
He forces his way inside of me
Then takes a knife from nearby
Tears run down my dirty cheeks
I know that soon, I shall die
Cold steel goes through my heart
And the horrid man finally leaves
A blood-covered woman now dead
Will haunt his soul for eternity.
2007-08-12 17:40:25 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I gave you your 1st star. At first I wasn't sure about it but it got wayyy better. And I hope that never has to happen to anyone.
2007-08-12 19:29:06 · answer #1 · answered by *Suga* 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
My opinion since, you ask, is this, some one here needs to go to jail.
And by the way, they don't love you like you imagine, or the way they try to make you feel.
RUN FOR THE NEAREST EXIT! RUN, RUN, RUN.
Otherwise, it's a great poem.
2007-08-12 18:27:19 · answer #2 · answered by luckychicken 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good poem but quite sad... a case of curiosity killed the cat, I must say.
Well, at least the woman can exact her revenge.
2007-08-12 17:49:57 · answer #3 · answered by Sophie 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good words of expression. Was this a vision or reality?
2007-08-13 05:58:03 · answer #4 · answered by Spirit Dancer 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really enjoy the poem. great work. Enter it at www.poetry.com
2007-08-12 17:48:31 · answer #5 · answered by mk 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
unbridled passion, I guess.
2007-08-12 18:40:15 · answer #6 · answered by the Boss 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋