Is this a good poem. Trustful coments, please.?

Question

Have you ever be in love?
I haven’t.
Either do I want to.
It does not seem like a pleasant thing.
One minute,
You can feel like a hummingbird on an early Sunday morning,
Peacefully chirping away at the morning sun.
The next minute,
You can feel like one of these innocent people
That was on one of those hijacked plans
That crashed into the towers in New York City.
One minute,
You can be treated like a flower in a garden:
Always watered, always looked at, and always cared for.
The next minute,
You can be treated like the homeless person on the corner:
No money, no one to live with, never had been cared for.
One minute,
You can be Princess Diane:
Always loved, hardly ever criticize, and always been listened to.
The next minute,
You can be a cold-harded person:
Never been loved, never been called beautiful, and never been looked at twice.
From the reasons above,
Moreover, other reasons that would make this poem too long,
I do not want to be in love.

(continued)

I do not want to be treated as if I am the best person in the world
To be a cold-harded piece of **** that will never love again.
My time will come,
And until then,
I do not want to be in love.

Answer 1

I wouldn't consider that a poem Its more like a piece of writing that could be more like an essay. It was very well put together though. If you want to write a poem, you need to add some lines that bring the piece together to keep it moving forward. Good piece of writing though. I enjoyed reading it.

Answer 2

Not really a poem, and ya could have hit check spelling, but sure can describe love that goes wrong. I'd like to tell you it does not happen to everybody. It does, and it will happen to you unless you are an island unto yourself forever. Love is funny and not so funny. What can anyone tell you, when it is on it is as good a good as when it is off it is as bad a bad. You are forever changed by the experience, and that is life.

Answer 3

SO while you are never falling in love to risk never getting hurt - are you happy? Probably not.

If we dont take risks we will never know - and - you are wrong mostly. There is more to love - when you find it you will know that even if all those bad things happen in the end - it would have been worth all the good things...

Answer 4

It is not a poem. It is prose broken up into lines to mimic poetry. It has none of the meter or lyrical quality that poetry has. Poetry is meant to be heard aloud. It is meant to have rhythm and flow to it. This doesn't. This is emo prose and not very good prose. Sorry. And her name was Princess Diana not Diane. Pax - C

Answer 5

You may not be in love, and if you were, no one who cares about language would reciprocate.
The spelling shouldn't be an obstacle to understanding the intent.