Photography is like a cover for things that don't want to be seen.
It can be of reality or about someone’s dream.
You can expose the truth or let the negatives develop.
[INSERT YOUR ANSWER HERE. Please have an ending that rhymes with develop]
2007-08-12 10:35:54 · 9 answers · asked by impishivy94 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
No matter what word you use, it's going to sound forced. Why? because it already sounds forced. Couplets are very difficult to pull off without sounding "rhymy", and your first two lines have already killed your poem. I'm sorry, hate me if you like, but they do and they did. Your idea is beautiful, but the way you tried to convey that idea was not so lucky. Why not try this:
"Photography, a cover, where nothing's what it seems
Sharp focused realities, or the soft blur of dreams
To expose the truth or let the negatives die
Sometimes there's a positive in developing a lie"
just a thought
2007-08-16 17:50:30 · answer #1 · answered by Kevin S 7 · 2⤊ 1⤋
Your premise is all screwed up. There are no "things that don't want to be seen." There are only people who don't want to see some things.
Furthermore, you see this in black and white, as if there is no such thing as color photography. "It can be of reality or about someone's dream" excludes a lot of what else "it" could be about. Similarly, "you can expose the truth or let the negatives develop" is another tendency towards the world being black and white rather than a range of possibilities between black and white that includes shades of grey.
So, no matter what answer you got from others here, your premises show a lack of experience in the real world, as well as inexperience with photography.
That's just how "I see it."
2007-08-19 07:13:11 · answer #2 · answered by margot 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I do, yet I also have a broader definition of poetry, which incorporates music lyrics... this facilitates extra helpful love than unfavorable. I shop questioning with reference to the poem that sounds like a breakup, and then, on the top, you found out the girl hasn't left him, in a breakup, she died... regardless of the undeniable fact that, in music lyrics there are very helpful statements approximately love.. Clint Black's " as quickly as I mentioned I Do:"... Madonna's " purely like A Prayer" Amy grant's " coronary heart In action" " Wind below My Wings" and extra are many of the main helpful love tho'ts accessible.
2016-10-02 04:44:59 · answer #3 · answered by gonzalescordova 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
For what can happen is overwhelming...
*Sorry thats the best I can do. I don't really think there's a word that rhymes with develope. hope this at least gives you some ideas.
2007-08-12 16:07:50 · answer #4 · answered by Argent 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Because the truth is your Angelic
It might be a little off, but it's the closest I can get and if ya say it fast enough it sounds OK... :-)
2007-08-12 11:42:29 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
So you feel the first two lines rhyme ?
2007-08-20 04:06:58 · answer #6 · answered by yjnt 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Shun the len's gaze and all it envelopes
2007-08-16 15:01:05 · answer #7 · answered by TMoney 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
envelope doesn't rhyme with develop.
scallop
wallop
gallop
2007-08-20 01:00:01 · answer #8 · answered by I'm nobody! 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You must put in "Caught by the fuzz"
2007-08-12 10:43:27 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋