Greetings, I am writing a CV/resume in english.
I want to know if the following 2 sentences are correct:
"Since then, some of my main interests are project management and analysys. Others include design and development."
I want to say that, design and development are also part of my main interests.
Is it correct?
Many thanks.
2007-08-12 07:33:24 · 11 answers · asked by fdmanana 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Higher Education (University +)
Analysis is usually spelled as I have written it.
Your second sentence is a fragment, not a complete sentence.
Try:
Since then, my main interests have been project management and analysis, along with design and development.
good luck to you.
2007-08-12 07:39:32 · answer #1 · answered by old lady 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I think they should look like this:
Since then some of my main interests are project management and analysis. Others include design and development.
I want to say that design and development are also part of my main interests.
I do not see a reason why you need commas in either sections and analysis was spelled incorrectly.
2007-08-12 07:37:17 · answer #2 · answered by Nick and Amy W 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Since then, some of my main interests include project management and analysis; also design and development.
2007-08-12 08:13:43 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Neither of the "sentences" is a sentence. I recommend the words be rewritten as:
"My main interests include project management, analysis, design and development."
2007-08-12 07:40:18 · answer #4 · answered by Mike B 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
"Since then some of my main interests have been project management and analysis and include design and development" (if "others" refer to "interests")
2007-08-12 07:43:48 · answer #5 · answered by Saeeda KM 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
want to say that, design and development are also part of my main interests. DELETE.
Duplication of the first statement.
"analysys" ........analysis.
2007-08-12 07:44:07 · answer #6 · answered by ed 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds good...analysys is spelled analysis. But everything else is good.
2007-08-12 07:37:11 · answer #7 · answered by NYinFL 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes
its takes some of the stress away from MAIN interest but it would be considered part of the same paragraph (subject)
2007-08-12 07:36:29 · answer #8 · answered by hajman 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The "are" in the first sentence should be "have been." And then also change the "include" to "have included."
2007-08-12 07:36:27 · answer #9 · answered by Thomas M 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
click right here for the subsequent step. or click right here to proceed to the subsequent step. The sentence you wrote isn't nicely suited. the two of those might artwork as a alternative for the sentence and can convey the comparable meaning.
2016-10-10 01:53:14 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋