Just rewrote my profile info.... would you go read it for me? How is it? All opinions are welcome!
2007-08-12 06:28:24 · 20 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
suggestions for improvement are welcome also!
2007-08-12 06:34:55 · update #1
CMA= Coverin' my @ss... hehe.
2007-08-12 06:42:00 · update #2
I think that it is good... If you want small changes, then e-mail it to me... I made notes, if you are interested in each detail... It was just too difficult to continually go back and forth... I have mistakenly erased my answer 3 times already... I'll try to copy and paste it back to you, if I am not too inept at doing so...
2007-08-12 06:47:47 · answer #1 · answered by Brat Sheila♥♫ - the Precocious 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
This is the best i can come out with... :) In my first semester, my marks were greatly influenced by some adversity. My flight from Pakistan got cancelled and was delayed to a later date. While on the plane, I started to feel unwell, thus contributing to me being late for class. I was not able to change any courses because the appeal for another class has been closed. (I’m not sure whether u have to appeal to go to another class or not) I ended up taking four University courses, namely, Chemistry, Calculus, English, and World Issues. I feel that this was a heavy load on me, thus I have some trouble in catching up with the rest of the class. I have tried my best to excel, but I still have to repeat two courses. I also want to state that I have visited Waterloo and find it to be a great place to live where the people are very nice and friendly. I love sports and I like to be involved in any sports-related activities as well, needless to say, I am very energetic. Overall, I hope you take my application into great consideration.
2016-05-20 22:14:10 · answer #2 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hey, hon- I like it, I really,really like it! Its honest and to the point. I like that you mean what you say and say what you mean, most are so worried about being p.c.- You are breath of fresh air!!I love that you love and accept who you are and make the best of what you've been given,with a 'kiss my a**' if you can't just love and accept me for who I am attitude, and not worrying about your "image" and what everyone thinks is refreshing as well. I hope you don't encounter any hateful,dis-respectful or nasty e-mail. If you do, just remeber that there are many of us who love you and think you're special. And hey, there may be some punctuation errors, but I don't really think its a big deal, or that many people will care. Best wishes!! =D
2007-08-12 06:59:52 · answer #3 · answered by no longer here 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Hi, read it through twice and looks good to me. You sound like someone who'd be a good friend. What's CMA, mean?
2007-08-12 06:38:39 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Your profile information is thorough and informative, however I have noticed some grammatical errors such as a few comma splices and fragments. Other than that, the content has a strong foundation.
2007-08-12 06:32:59 · answer #5 · answered by USAman 6 · 2⤊ 1⤋
When I was a news reporter I would get copy from other offices to edit on deadline from people who I only knew by name.
2007-08-12 06:57:40 · answer #6 · answered by Zombie Birdhouse 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's fine, "Sweet Elf", its not for me to judge, or anyone else, for that matter, you're a sweetheart and funny, and if anyone has a problem with you, well, then....thats just wrong !!! Mark loves ya too...lol !!
2007-08-12 06:56:07 · answer #7 · answered by Cami 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Looks good to me
2007-08-12 06:36:21 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
You give much, too much information. In spite of your comments, you've opened yourself to a great deal of negative, biased communication.
There's one bit of incorrect grammar.
"Don't take that personal", should be "Don't take that personally".
2007-08-12 06:33:44 · answer #9 · answered by Fully armed in the battle of wits 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
ko! i read it. WHY do you put all that up there? You invite a buncha problems spewing out your info...but maybe you are trying to! Well, you ASKED!
2007-08-12 06:33:04 · answer #10 · answered by ravin_lunatic 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋