...everybody just what you found...When you save yourself, you save the world, and you know you can do "That," girl...Everything ends in the mirror, but window minds see much clearer...In the end it's all the same, spiral staircase with a broken chain, Heaven is a brand new car, and only that will take you far, so...(repeat chorus)...over-colorize everything, live for the night and feel the sting, wade down deep, cliff-dive the shallows, and melt away your plastic halo, 'cause what's inside is Not what counts, your soul's a check that's gonna bounce, live for today, death for tomorrow, Be the ethics and f*** the morals, break the program, change the plan, more than angels, less than human, hear the hidden silent sound, lose the harmony, more is found, in the end it's all the same, spiral staircase and a broken chain, Heaven is a brand new car, and only That will take you far, so...? (repeat chorus...)
(this was a snippet of one of my songs...what do you think...?)
2007-08-12 04:56:55 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Philosophy
every bit a primal scream that rips the fabric of childhood dreams.
anguish echos in silent halls, where the impaled hang on moonlit walls.
Interesting and very emotional.
I still prefer Patsy Cline.
2007-08-12 06:49:04 · answer #1 · answered by Dr weasel 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I'm more visual than lyrical. It reminds me of Edward Munch's "The Scream". That is a master piece even if I don't want it hanging in my house. Same for your lyrics - good imagery, some parts really click, but I sense futility and I prefer upbeat so I can't judge it any further than that.
2007-08-12 14:15:01 · answer #2 · answered by V 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really like it. It's just amazing we can put these words together if we really feel something. I'm somewhat a poet myself, and I'm truly awed at how the words just flow out of me. As long as you feel strongly about something, it's alright with me. Just try to keep the cussing to a minimum please.
2007-08-12 12:07:31 · answer #3 · answered by jade4stone 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I thought I lived in a dark place---you win.
2007-08-12 18:14:51 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very good unclear and meaningless message. I just hope you don't rhyme 'shallows' with 'halo.'
2007-08-12 12:10:00 · answer #5 · answered by shmux 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i dont like it when it say f**** word its not good for my memories because once its in the memo i canot get rid of it until i forget about it and i dont know wen.
but i like it when it says be the ethic beacuse i need it and recommend it
2007-08-12 12:03:57 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
Though I don't share your concept I applaud your abilities, Well done!
2007-08-12 12:09:22 · answer #7 · answered by midnite rainbow 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i suppose it's good. the only one who can really critique this song is you because you know exactly what it means.
2007-08-12 12:08:08 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's negative and depressing and very good.
2007-08-12 12:20:09 · answer #9 · answered by phil8656 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
beam '''HIM''' up scottie...some good verses and thought provoking..some confusing...what kind of a beat can you put to it.....beam me up scottie
2007-08-12 13:32:50 · answer #10 · answered by eb_guy 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋