Here's a synopsis: A girl and boy in their late teens meet on a deserted beach off-season. They talk and eventually become friends. After a time, the girl falls in love with the boy, and then discovers that he's gay. I have 2 endings. How would you end this story? BTW, part of it was posted on this site a few weeks ago.
2007-08-11 11:16:09 · 15 answers · asked by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7 in Society & Culture ➔ Cultures & Groups ➔ Lesbian, Gay, Bisexual, and Transgender
I would not end it, I would keep it going for a little while longer... I would let the girl know he wasy gay... that she expected her brother was gay.. she makes a connection with them. then she feels she always will have her first love near.
Kendal Nite, GLBT author, visit his website www.compasspink.mobi, He is so kind and help me write a story once for a little group, He is very sweet and helpful...
2007-08-11 11:25:10 · answer #1 · answered by southernboy 4 · 3⤊ 0⤋
They leave the beach and return to the big city where they find jobs at rival magazines. They are constantly in competition with each other. She tries her hardest to break up all of his relationships, never having one herself. Soon he is editor and heads to Europe where he meets a George Michael type and the Queen invites them over for tea. He calls his best friend at the other magazine to tell her and she dies from the news. He is suddenly free to pursue his real dream. To be the Queen. He kills her and hides her body and puts on her clothes. No one knows the difference until Prince William returns from a bar one night and sees that thing between his legs by accident. He tries to blackmail the fake queen but ends up mysteriously ill. The end.
2007-08-11 11:38:48 · answer #2 · answered by realangst 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋
At first, she gets angry with him and tries to get him to change. But as she gets to know the turmoil he is going through (and after a failed suicide attempt) she is drawn closer to him and their friendship becomes more close knit. She even tries to set him up with another guy she ends up meeting through one of her classes. Since this is a story that seems to focus more on the girl, I would have it end with a tragedy that takes his life and she spins it into something positive by hosting a charitable event in his honor.
2007-08-11 11:35:13 · answer #3 · answered by Whatev' Yo' 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
He desires money and luxury and is lured into the world of lust and perversion by a rich older man.The older man creeps him out but he loves the lifestyle.Finally ,he realizes the emptiness of it all .He knows now happiness could be with the girl but alas,he has contracted a violent strain of HIV and is slowly dying.She visits him in the hospital just before he dies and he confesses his error and what a waste his life now was.
2007-08-11 11:25:24 · answer #4 · answered by AngelsFan 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
She is so sad, she takes an overdosis sleeping pills, and dies at night on the beach.
The boy, who in fact is a good but light hearted, light person, who likes to joke, finds the girl on the beach, and puts a dagger in his heart, because of course, it was one of his jokes.
Two bodies, sunset, beach.
2007-08-11 11:33:30 · answer #5 · answered by ? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Desperate for attention, she settles for a guy with serious anger issues. She corresponds to her gay friend and he visits her one day. She has to work that night, but they plan to go out and tlak when she gets off. She walks in on her new beau and her friend locked in intimate acts.
2007-08-11 11:45:25 · answer #6 · answered by MichaelJesusJacksonChrist 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
perhaps he's not gay at all. he has only lived his life as a sensitive young boy not interested in typically masculine endeavors...and so he has been treated accordingly and only thought he was gay. now this young woman stirs feelings in him he has never felt...confused and torn he works through these new emotions with the girl who loves him and whom he increasingly falls deeply in love with also...it's just a shame Summer is over.
2007-08-11 11:33:40 · answer #7 · answered by Rick S 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
i would end the story with her passing up love opportunities because she still hopes that he would one day fall in love with her. later on in life she is lonely and resentful of him for being gay......when they are old though and lonely, they live together and she is once again happy as she was when they were younger.
2007-08-11 11:27:00 · answer #8 · answered by m.bbc.nyc 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
How about they become close friends... she is his best man at his wedding to his Canadian bf who has a straight best man and both fall in love.
2007-08-11 11:23:49 · answer #9 · answered by HouAnswerGuy 6 · 3⤊ 1⤋
She relizes that she can no longer be in love with the man of her dreams.. but will always have a piece of him in her heart! (thats a tear jerker!!)
2007-08-11 11:21:14 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋