Looking at the past
The days that we had
Remembering our memories
The good times and the bad
I regret not telling you
The feelings I had inside
I knew it wouldn't matter
So I pushed them aside
I continued every day
Pretending I was fine
But deep down inside
I was wishing you were mine
You may be gone
But forever in my heart
Though you're in a better place
We will never be apart
You're up in the heavens
An angel you have become
I loved you oh so much
I thought you could be "The One"
I just wish you knew
I loved you with all my heart
I wish we could go back
And make a brand new start
But now it is too late
You will never know
The emotions I've felt
And how I loved you so
I guess this is the end
Our final goodbye
Knowing you are gone
Always makes me cry
this was written to my bestfriend that passed away, i was inlove with him since i was 8 year old but never told him..
R.I.P nick. i miss you
2007-08-11 08:58:22 · 10 answers · asked by Kelli-Anne h 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Wow! The depth of emotion in this poem...
You have a really good handle on rhythm and rhyme also. This poem is a great example of an abab quatrain.
Excellent, and I'm so sorry about your friend. :(
Oh, and I give it a 10. Keep writing, you have a gift!
2007-08-11 11:53:34 · answer #1 · answered by The_Cricket: Thinking Pink! 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
great that was very heart warmin' sometimes in life we think nothing will ever go wrong so thats way we hold back feelings we always think well i will tell him tomorrow,when we should go ahead and say what we feel at the time, tomorrow those feelings may be different and if so that was the way it was meant to be'but babydoll he knows now just how much you loved him,and he is watching out for you everyday sometimes you will see him go past you that is his way of letting you now he's by your side.go talk to him he will hear you and just maybe you will hear want he felt for you ! i bet you like it for love goes two ways. everything is going to be alright after your visit....kept on writing poems you are very good ...enter this one in poetry.com i will vote on it 10..i write poems on poetry.com you can read them under donna wyatt one is about my dad.good luck!
2007-08-11 14:16:43 · answer #2 · answered by donna_brown806 1 · 2⤊ 0⤋
10 for the truth in it
10 for the love in it
10 for the regret in it
9 for the poetry skills
You made me cry. How many times in life have we done much the same? We waited tot late to tell someone how much we cared. I promised myself I would never do that again.
2007-08-11 09:27:14 · answer #3 · answered by bsharpbflatbnatural 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I have no opinion on this poem. anything from the heart should never be evaluated from an outside source...if it felt right to put it down and share it with others then that's all matters.
2007-08-11 09:05:52 · answer #4 · answered by wildflower 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
11- pretty <3
2007-08-11 09:07:54 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
i give it a 10 really like it
2007-08-11 09:29:54 · answer #6 · answered by ron h 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
hope ull meet him in heaven.
2007-08-11 09:03:27 · answer #7 · answered by ? 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats great i loved it
2007-08-11 11:14:38 · answer #8 · answered by julz 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
beautiful
i'm sorry for your loss
2007-08-11 09:06:26 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
That was sweet.
2007-08-11 12:10:53 · answer #10 · answered by Emperor Insania Says Bye! 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋