Will you star this poem if you like it?
Some Say I'm Brainwashed
By Semper Fi 83 8/11/07
When you say I'm brainwashed,
Does that mean my thoughts are clean?
You read my mind somehow,
And failed to find something mean?
Just because I praise the Lord,
You laugh, point, ridicule,
Or yawn at me like you're bored.
That only makes me love God more!
Behold! He stands knocking!
Who will open up the door?
Lord I will, I will, open my heart.
I pray thee Father,
Let nothing tear us apart.
I need you,
Like I need air to breathe.
Am I brainwashed,
If I pray on my knees?
Am I brainwashed,
If I cherish Your Word.
Am I brainwashed,
That when you called, I heard!
Then let me be Father,
Totally washed of the brain!
For i will never use Your Holy Name in vain!
2007-08-11 05:21:28 · 13 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
You really are so talented and your love of Our Lord is always evident in everything you write.
God Bless.
2007-08-11 06:34:27 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
Yes! Praise the Lord!
2007-08-11 09:08:12 · answer #2 · answered by bsharpbflatbnatural 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Star Light, Star Bright First Star I see tonight I wish I may, I wish I might Have this wish I wish tonight
2016-05-19 22:12:54 · answer #3 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
As always, it is excellent. Poetry with a message, that is a great thing. God Bless. Keep the faith.
2007-08-11 09:52:57 · answer #4 · answered by Joel 2 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
this was tight.
why don't you post your work on this website
www.gspoetry.com
i been a member for about a year and it's a great way to read and share poetry
2007-08-11 10:40:20 · answer #5 · answered by MZCARTER 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I loved it. Beautiful. And I gave you a star.
2007-08-11 05:28:41 · answer #6 · answered by Scoots 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
ive used his holy name in vain so many times , i like the meaning of yr poem but i dont like the poem , its boring
2007-08-11 05:31:41 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 2⤋
It's a heartfelt prayer-poem. :) Good work.
2007-08-11 05:41:59 · answer #8 · answered by Ms Ghost 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
THAT WAS MY FAVORITE SO FAR....I FELT YOUR PASSION FOR OUR LORD, I ALMOST RAISED MY HAND TO THE SKY....YOU DO GOD PROUD!
2007-08-11 05:47:10 · answer #9 · answered by KayJay 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I admire your devotion, although I can no longer share it.
2007-08-11 05:26:36 · answer #10 · answered by TeeHee 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋