PLEASE LIE TO ME: By WaNaBe
Please lie to me and tell me it's alright
Please don't make me put up a fight
Tell me what my hearts wants to hear
Protect me from any fear
Your not here for me, but you say you are
I know someone else is being your everlasting star
She gets you days, and I sometimes get your nights
I hate this darkness, turn on the lights
Please lie to me, say you understand
Please don't break this heart finer than sand
Let me hear your voice, I know it will one day fade
I know you don't care, your love has straded
Be w/ me, I know you want her
New feelings in heart begin to stir
You say there's no one but me
I know you lie, in your eyes I can see
Please lie to me, be my friend
Please stay close, may your touch never end
I don't want to loose you, so I'll play along
you think I'm weak, but this girl is strong
Whatever you say, I will always believe
But I look in you eyes, you desieve
2007-08-10 17:50:41 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Say your mine but I know your untrue
The feelings you feel, I feel more for you
Please lie to me, make me feel loved
But I know one I will be shoved
I know you think of her, and not me
She is the lucky one of us three
You throw me around, and kick me to the side
We both know you can't always hide
She may be the one who wins it all
But before you know it your heart wil fall
I hope you know what you've done, I hope you can see
All I wanted was you to lie to me.
What do you think? scale from one to ten!
2007-08-10 17:55:35 · update #1
1. Its "strayed", not straded
2. You must be around the age of 15, because I used to write just like that when I was that age
3. You can do alot better than him (if the story is true)
4. I give it a 9. Really good job, sweetie.
2007-08-10 17:59:29 · answer #1 · answered by **[Witty_Name]** 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
6
2007-08-11 00:55:41 · answer #2 · answered by RANDELL 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
8
2007-08-11 00:57:20 · answer #3 · answered by KaykayxMichelle 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I'll grant your request; I'll lie to you.
Your spelling was great. There were NO grammatical errors, and the rhyme scheme was complex and impressive.
It just isn't my style of poetry. I prefer the classics. Today's lamenting love pleadings just don't do it for me.
Nothing personal, really. You just caught me on a bad night. In fact, ignore my answer altogether. Again, I apologize.
2007-08-11 00:58:04 · answer #4 · answered by Damn Sarge 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
dont listen to skinhead charlie. just ignore that troll.
i thought it was beautiful. id give it a 10, 10 being the best.
2007-08-11 00:57:50 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 1⤋
it's good..I'll give it a 7..just keep writing poetry because you have a lot of skill
2007-08-11 01:03:18 · answer #6 · answered by ☮Witty Sarcasm♥ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
perfect 10 !
i can't even write a poem like that :)
superb
2007-08-11 00:57:53 · answer #7 · answered by ? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
this was great, extra-ordinary!!!!! i give you a full 10 plus
2007-08-11 12:02:06 · answer #8 · answered by shanett2hype 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
this one sounds good, who wrote it?
2007-08-11 01:00:20 · answer #9 · answered by otsy 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
loooviiing it babe!
2007-08-11 00:55:41 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋