I've posted 80 poems on this site, and I'd love for some more opinions and constructive criticism. If you will, please choose whatever poems you'd like to read, and let me know what you think of it. You may do this for any number of poems that you wish.
Link:
http://thestarlitecafe.com/perl-bin/search.cgi?name=demongirl
Please state the title of the poem and your thoughts and opinions. If you choose one that's untitled, please also give the date.
2007-08-10 13:30:28 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Okay, I'm lost as to what any of you are talking about.
The pen name I use on that site is demongirl, in case anyone's mistaken.
2007-08-10 13:39:12 · update #1
Psychosis: Thank you. I do have poems on there that fall into the love category, as well as a couple in the spiritual, and one in the nature.
2007-08-10 13:44:45 · update #2
I, too, am lost as to what many of these people are responding to.
I think you definitely have a flair for writing poetry, albeit mostly dark. I found "Don't Let Me Die" to be a definite cry for help. I hope you're not as suicidal as some of your poems suggest.
2007-08-10 13:51:30 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-10-02 01:56:22 · answer #2 · answered by shenk 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I read a few of them and I love the ones that I read. When you get a chance, please check out my site too. I write poems as well and I have included three of them on my site at http://www.rubysbooks.i8.com
2007-08-10 14:37:16 · answer #3 · answered by Spirit Dancer 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow did you write these yourself? They're deep and alot of it is personal has your own personal feelings involved I only read the first few. Alot to do with sadness and sorrow but what about your fun side surely theres a nicer side to you.
2007-08-10 13:37:38 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
That poem you wrote about dead babies is really good. I also like the one about the purple horse you wrote while you were on acid. Great work!
2007-08-10 13:34:11 · answer #5 · answered by Buckwheat 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Maybe if I had more time, like poets, I am self-involved.
2007-08-10 13:33:43 · answer #6 · answered by Bob Boblaw 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
u are preciouce , i love ur eyes when it looks to the world
2007-08-10 13:34:57 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋