Hello my dear
I am now here
To tempt your rotten soul
You told me lies
You made me cry
To you I do not owe
I've never held a single grudge
But do not wish youwell
God will be the final judge
And send your soul to hell.
2007-08-10 09:45:56 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
wow!
that's really got some rhythm!
nice...
i like your usage of the words - it's different...
2007-08-10 09:51:00 · answer #1 · answered by Amaris in Wonderland 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
You have written like a satan who recognised yourself and i would suggest repentence as a best solution.
2007-08-12 02:53:50 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Bravo.
2007-08-10 09:52:50 · answer #3 · answered by Giggly Giraffe 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was great! Just my opinion; I'm not an expert poet, but...
That was great!
: )
2007-08-16 16:18:16 · answer #4 · answered by rockiebattles411 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it, but I'm no expert.
2007-08-10 09:52:28 · answer #5 · answered by noonecanne 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋