My World's End
by: Yoselis Ramos
I open my eyes
Looking at what sorrounds me
Darkness, a lone heart, an empty soul
My feet drag me through the dark space
I feel cold air splashing my face
The reality of my heart unfilled
Brings rain pouring on me
I've been kissed
By far worse than death
But by Cupid
This vicious fiend is the reason
For my mourn of love
I met his crystal eyes
And the end of life
I was dazed, hypnotized
And completely his
His voice:
The melody to my soul
His smile:
Light to all my fears
My world filled with pink and butterflies
Soon to be a living hell
A fray against reality
Dreaming you would once look my way
Drawing my sword
But the shot already going through my flesh
Simply knowing I will never be a part of your heart
Brought the end to my world
2007-08-10
09:32:39
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Thank you Person. for your suggestions. They really are helpfull and I definately agree with the ponctuation, but I've seen a lot of people on here who dont prefer the periods and the commas, but you're right. thank you!
2007-08-10
10:17:29 ·
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