rules: everyone add one sentence to the poem.
and please try to make it cohesive.
2007-08-09 16:04:34 · 21 answers · asked by tt 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Until someone realizes it's dumb!
(ok i don't think it's dumb it rhymes)
2007-08-15 15:49:39 · answer #1 · answered by Delia 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I was expecting something totally different, and that only adds to my enjoyment of this finely crafted, epic prose. You have a unique gift of drawing the reader into your descriptive passages. I felt as if I were there as a witness, as your story unfolded. This is unique to any composition I've yet read on this forum. You pulled this off with a near perfect blend of ordinary, evocative chilling and tense filled emotion. Congratulations, Bri.
2016-05-18 04:34:31 · answer #2 · answered by savannah 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
What a horrid ending to this first date!
2007-08-14 16:19:46 · answer #3 · answered by margot 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
To find that I'm out of sight and things have gone astray,
2007-08-10 16:25:48 · answer #4 · answered by Argent 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The lines are tight, the mood is right, this satisfies my appetite.
2007-08-10 01:43:01 · answer #5 · answered by marian 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Better never than much too late
2007-08-11 15:40:33 · answer #6 · answered by Kevin S 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
This evening's embers threaten to be stoked
2007-08-16 14:51:55 · answer #7 · answered by TMoney 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
never made a move until i approached you from the light
2007-08-09 16:33:15 · answer #8 · answered by VJ 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
with a big stick the poor are poked
2007-08-17 06:08:03 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
But, no, the ending has not yet come,
2007-08-15 08:44:40 · answer #10 · answered by embroidery fan 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋